Exposition
1.This story takes place in school
2.nothing really did not happened.

Conflict and Climax
1.The problems that the central character face was not knowing what happened before the police arrived at their house, also James sister Tina face the same thing.
2. When I learned how the problem was worked was at the end of the story.

Denouement
1.When James found out that DJ killed his mother he was upset and crushed as he held his and cried.
2. The beginning can be more grabbing towards the reader.


Characterization
1.James, Tina, the grandmother, and DJ...I would describe their roles ok...but could be more better about their characters
2.The story tells us that James is a very nice boy who is shy and lives in his own world.
3. I really don’t learn much indirect about the character.
4. Making the story more detail. I also believe you should add more drama in the story in the beginning like talk about the story then introduce the reader about james