Sheron Gardner
Creative Writing
October 15,2007
A New Town
One day there was a girl named Morgan and she lived in Brooklyn, New York with her family. One day Morgan and her friends Page and Caitlin went to the movies to see American Gangster. Her friend Page was a very conceited and had a bad attitude, and her other friend Caitlin was a very shy and a nice girl and they have been friends since they where three years old. When she went home her mother and father sat her down and said “sweetheart we have some great news for you where moving down south”. Morgan’s mouth dropped and tears began to run down her face and she said “how could you do this to me you know I love living here”, Morgan ran upstairs and called Page then Page called Caitlin and when Morgan told them that they were sad and Caitlin begin to cry but Morgan said don’t cry we will always be best friends and we will always keep in touch. As Morgan was cleaning her room out she found a picture of her, Page, and Caitlin when they where three years old and she began to cry. The whole way down to her new hometown she had an attitude and didn’t say a word to her parents.
When they arrived to there new home town it was very hot and humid and there house was so different from her old house it was smaller. While they were unpacking there things Morgan seen a big mouse and after that she began to cry and said
“I want to go back to New York”. That night she slap with her parents, the next morning she got up and got dress for her first day at her new school. When she got there she went inside her class and everyone turned around and looked her up and down then she sat in her seat. That hold day all she was thinking about were Page and Caitlin at lunch a few of her classmates came over and intrudes them. One name was Cashsha A.K.A Cash-Money and she was the nice one, another was Hollywood, which was her real name she was very loud and last was Keylolo she was very ghetto and would say anything out her mouth. They came over a said “hey would you like to sit with use for lunch” and Morgan said “yes I will be happy to set with you guys at lunch”. As the days went on they became her best friends
When Morgan was walking home she got a call on her cell phone saying “Morgan this is mom hurry home I have a surprise for you” after Morgan got that call she ran home and when she opened her home door Page and Caitlin was seating right there. They ran to each other and they hugged each other. Morgan said, “hoe did you guys get down here” they replied, “ When you were at school your mom came and got use. After that Morgan said come one guys I want you to met my friends, when they went outside Cashsha, Hollywood and Key Lolo was setting right there. Morgan introduced them and Page with her smart mouth she said “what kind of name is Key Lolo” and Key Lolo replied “it’s my name do you have a problem with my name cause I love it” Page replied “ I don’t have a problem with your name, I have a problem with you” Key Lolo said “ girl I will wipe the floor with you” Morgan jumped in it and said “ guys please it my birthday don’t do this because you all are my friends and Page if you have a problem with Key Lolo you have a problem with me and Key Lolo if you have a problem with Page you have a problem with me and that goes for the rest of you so do I make myself clear” and they all replied Yeah. After that there was know more problems between them and they all became best friends. Ather that day Page and Caitlin lifted to return back to Brooklyn, New York and Page and Caitlin would come visit her every other weekend.
The End
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EXPOSITION
1. WHEN/WHERE DOES THIS STORY TAKE PLACE? THE STORY TOOK PLACE IN BROOKLYN, NEWYORK AND IT TOOK PLACE DOWN SOUTH.
CONFLICT AND CLIMAX
1. WHAT PROBLEMS DOES THE CENTRAL CHARACTER FACE? THE PROBLEM THAT THE CENTRAL CHARACTER HAD TO FACE WAS THAT SHE HAD TO MOVE DOWN SOUTH AND HER BEST FRIENDS IN WERE SHE IS MOVING FROM WHICH IS BOOKLYN, NEWYORK
2. WHEN DO YOU LEARN HOW THE PROBLEM IS WORKED OUT? THE PROBLEM IS WORKED OUT ON HER BIRTHDAY WHEN SHE MADE NEW FRIENDS AND HER BEST FRIENDS CAME DOWN TO VIST
DENOUEMENT
1. HOW DOES THE STORY END? THE STORY ENDS BY AT FIRST HER NEW FRIENDS ARE ABOUT TO FIGHT HER BEST FRIENDS THEN THEY ALL BECOME FRIENDS.
2. SUGGEST AN EXTRA SCENE TO STRENGTHEN THE PLOT. I THINK YOU SHOULD TELL MORE ABOUT HOW HER NEW SCHOOL WENT.
CHARACTERIZATION
1. WHO ARE THE CHARACTERS INVOLVED IN THE STORY? HOW WOULD YOU DESCRIBE THEIR ROLES? THE CHARCTERS THAT IS INVOLED IS Cashsha, Hollywood, Key Lolo, Page and Caitlin
2. DIRECT CHARACTERIZATION: WHAT DOES THE AUTHOR TELL US "DIRECTLY" ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST (MAIN CHARACTER) FROM HIS OR HER PHYSICAL APPEARANCE AND PERSONALITY?
3. INDIRECT CHARACTERIZATION: WHAT DO WE LEARN "INDIRECTLY" ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST FROM WHAT HE OR SHE SAYS (DOES)? WHAT DO WE LEARN ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST FROM WHAT OTHERS SAY ABOUT HIM OR HER?
4. SUGGEST AN ADDED DETAIL TO STRENGTHEN THE DESCRIPTION OF ONE MAJOR OR MINOR CHARACTER.
FROM ~*ASMIRA.L.TULL*~ AKA BM
Exposition.
1. This story takes place in the main character’s hometown. Then it changes to a new town where at first the main character doesn’t like it at first, but then she starts to get a liking to her new town.
Conflict and Climax
1.That she is moving to a new town.
2.When she starts to make new friends at her new town.
Denoument
1. The story ends when her old friends visits the main character .
2.An extra scene should be showing the main character’s two groups of friends have a bigger fight that could end the main character’s friendship with two of the groups of friends.
Characterization
1.Morgan- the main character
Caitlin and Page- the old friends
Key Lolo, Hollywood , Cashsha- the old friends
2.
3. Indirectly, the author tells us that she is a person who really cares about her friends.
4. An added detail to strengthen the main character should be making her protect her new group of friends. Maybe that would spark a new conflict between the two groups.
the one above this was mine(dan)
Exposition
1. This story takes place on a hot, sunny day/
Conflict and Climax
1. These 6 kids are playing a game but a crazy man starts chasing them.
2. When the kids are finally captured
Denouement
1.The story ends when the kids are finally captured.
2. Maybe if we learn why the kids are being chased.
Characterizations
1. The characters are king, Sholeah, Tiheed, Meosha, Bruce and Brittany and they all are running away from a man who is chasing them.
3.The author tells us that they are scared of the man.
4 . A detail should be that kids are willing to stand up to this crazy man.
-DAN
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