Chardae Jenkins Lost N Found
Marissa couldn’t wait until this day, and now it was finally here. She waited impatiently for the remainder of her friends to arrive to her house. The food was already packed as well as her belongings. When they arrived about fifteen minutes later they were all ready to go. There were about three cars filled of children, each car containing two adults. The ride there took about an hour and fifteen minutes. “We are finally here,” yelled Marissa. “Yes, I can’t wait to ride all the rides,” screamed Marissa best friend Tina. “Okay were going to split up” Marissa’s mom said, six children in a group”. Once they were arranged into their groups, the children were ready to have fun. They decided to ride the wet rides first. Once in line, they waited impatiently while the line moved really slow because the theme park was so over crowded on this day. Not wanting to wait Marissa took it upon herself to try to pass her way in front of people. While doing so, she lost contact with her group. Marissa didn’t think much of it because she thought “ I’ll just meet them at the exit when the ride is over. Once the ride was over she waited to see her friends and mom. A half an hour went pass and she still hadn’t seen them. Now she started to panic. “Where are they?” she cried out loud. She walked around the park for what seemed like an hour and still didn’t see anyone she came to the park with. Now she was becoming angry and frustrated, and she was only eight years old, this was becoming very scary. She thought she saw them in front of her she yelled “Mom!” the lady turned around and to her surprise it wasn’t her mother. Marissa searched everywhere the ladies bathroom, food stands, all the water rides and still hadn't seen her mother. Soon she started to ask people had they seen a women who fit her mothers description, eveyone she asked replied no. She continued to look for her mother and friends for about twenty more minutes. Finally she heard a women cry out “Marissa” and at last she was relieved.
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1.Inside an amusement park during the day time.
2.Maybe Marissa was sleep waiting for this day to come.
1.Marissa got lost inside the park.
2.When Marissa is found by her mother.
1.Marissa found her mother.
2.Maybe talk about what the other kids was doin first.
1.Marissa, her mother and other kids.
2.She tells how old Marissa is.
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4.Talk about how Marissa looked or acted.
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