TRAPPED OBSESSION
In the town of Shawville, there lived a football coach named Mr. Dolph, Mr. Dolph coaches at Abercrombie High School’s football team for the past ten years. For five years, the football team has been undefeated. Everybody in Shawville supports them as well as their cheerleaders. The cheerleaders are very popular and hype up every game. The cheerleaders at Abercrombie High are undefeated as well as the football team. There has been many times where the cheerleaders would win championships from competing with other High Schools. They are well known for their excellence and outstanding cheers.
Mr. Dolph is a very determined football coach who mentors the students well. Some students like Mr. Dolph and think he’s ok but mean at times. But a year ago Mr. Dolph’s daughter Aaliyah passed away from a car accident. Many people say that Aaliyah was drinking while driving but as of now the police still investigate Aaliyah’s death.
Aaliyah’s best friend, Destiny is captain of the cheerleading team. Destiny’s very popular and silly, But less silly and more humble since Aaliyah’s death.
“Drop and give me twenty! Seniors!” Mr. Dolph shouted. “1..2.. 3..” the football team yells. “Championships is next month and you all know what we have do” Mr. Dolph shouted. A week before spring break the football team and the cheerleaders practice on the football field together, preparing for the championships. “Alright ladies one more time” Destiny shouted. “Abercrombie! High!, Were! The! Best!, We! Aint! Got! No! Stress!. The cheerleaders shouted repeatedly.
When the cheerleaders were practicing , Mr. Dolph walked over to Destiny trying to get her attention to say hi, but she was to busy cheering. Mr. Dolph has a habit of
being friendly to her, but sometimes he can be to friendly. For instance, one day at practice Destiny was teaching a new girl a cheer. Mr. Dolph came over and put his hand on her hip, and said “good job Des” and walked away. She looked at him, rolled her eyes and said “thanks” but the truth is, Mr. Dolph has a deep passionate obsession over Destiny. Before Aaliyah’s death, there has been many times were Aaliyah would run to Destiny’s house because her dad would try to beat her. Aaliyah would cry herself to sleep in Destiny’s arms until the next morning.
When practice is over the cheerleaders usually go hang out and have fun, but this night was different. “Hey Des you want to grab something to eat” Tyrell said. “Sure” Destiny said smiling. Tyrell and Destiny been friends since freshman year but never went out with each other. But now their seniors, and both feel they should be more than friends. “Ok well I’ll pick you up at six o’clock” Tyrell said. “ok don’t be late Rell I know you” Destiny said smiling and laughing. Mr. Dolph over hears Tyrell and Destiny’s conversation and doesn’t like what he heard. As Tyrell gets into his car and drives off. Mr. Dolph follows him. When Tyrell gets out the car Mr. Dolph runs up behind him, and hits him with a bat. Tyrell fall to the ground and was knocked out unconscious for a very long time. Mr. Dolph left a note saying “she don’t want you” Then speeded off.
“Hello. can I speak to Tyrell” Destiny says ready to curse him out. “hello”
“Um yea what happened this time Rell” “Yo I was getting out my car, and somebody came out of nowhere. Someone hit me on my head, I was knocked out unconscious. My mom came outside because she heard a speeding car drive off. Next thing you know she found me on the ground. But I’m ok, my head still hurts a little though. Oh yea and they left a note saying she don’t want you, Whatever that means” Rell saying laughing. “Oh my gosh I’m glad your ok, and that’s not funny Rell, you need to be serious right now” Destiny said. “I know but its so funny” “Pshhh..bye Rell I’ll see you tomorrow I’m bout to go to bed. Destiny said laughing and shacking her head.
“Bye mom I’m leaving” Alright Des have a good day. As Destiny walked to the bus stop listing to her ipod. She looks over to her right and see Mr. Dolph pull up beside her. “Hey Des want a ride” No I’m ok” Destiny said. “you sure” yes I’m sure. “come on get it” No! go ahead. Destiny said with a little bit of angry in her voice. “I don’t think your mother raised you like that Des” Mr. Dolph said. Mr. Dolph started yelling and threading Destiny, she was so scared that Mr. Dolph was acting like a maniac, but not surprised because Aaliyah told her that her dad was crazy. The bus pulled up and Destiny ran on the bus as fast as she could.
When Destiny got off the bus she immediately ran to her friends, and told them everything. “Are you ok Des” yea I’m ok. She said nervously. “He must be obsessed with you like he was with Aaliyah” Mirrah said. “Huh, what do you mean” “Des nobody told you” Kara said surprised. “told me what” Destiny said with a confused expression on her face. “Des Aaliyah’s (car accident) said Mirrah quietly. “Oh yea she was drinking and driving” No she wasn’t. “Yea she did die from a car accident, but she was trying to get away from her dad, because he was trying to rape her” Mirrah said. “she ran a red light that’s how she got in a accident, but her dad was the true reason” Kara said. Destiny was silent for a while thinking and wondering should she tell her mom, teachers or even the police. But what only came to her mind was that , she was in a trapped obsession.
By: Tanya Murray
Monday, November 19, 2007
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Exposition: 1. Your story takes place in Shawnville, around present day time period.
2. Aaliyah has gotten into a car crash and the town was kind of rattled by it.
Conflict And Climax: 1. Mr. Dolph a phsyco rapist football coach is obsessed with his dead daughter's friend.
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