The Set was a gang. They were four unruly kids from the mean streets of Philadelphia. They were from a section of Philly called Up Town. As they would say, that’s were it go down at. The gang members were Ice Pick, Ray-Ray, Screw Driver, and Waffle. Waffle was the leader.
Whatever Waffle wanted the Set to do, they did it. They were notorious for selling all types of narcotics. They were like Rite Aid or CVS. They had any prescription drug a person wanted. They even had glaucoma medicine, if you know what I mean. They had the same routine everyday. They would go outside, bust traps for a few hours, and then go back in the house. All of them graduated high school except Screw Driver. He dropped out. He thought that he could not make money in school.
One day, while they were chilling on the stoop, Waffle said angrily, “Yo, this shit is borin. All we do is sit on the same stoop, bustin traps, and smoking weed. We have to make things interesting.” Then Ray-Ray asked, “What are we gonna do?” Ice Pick said, “I know, let’s rob somebody. No better yet, let’s rob a store.” Waffle said, “Aight, bet. I’m gon get the burners, Screw, you get the masks and gloves. We all gon wear black one-piece Dickies and black skullys. That sounds good?” The rest said yes.
Friday night, it was on. They all met at Ice Pick’s crib, because his mom was out playing bingo. They all got ready and made a plan. Once they got the plan, they all jumped in the car and headed to MAMA LEE’S FOOD MARKET. They parked a block away from the store. They came around the corner swiftly. They were watching out for the cops (rollers as they called them). As soon as they saw the coast was clear, they put their masks on and did what they went there for.
Mama Lee didn’t know what to do. She had her store in that neighborhood for twenty years and was never robbed until that night. They didn’t just take the cash, they took the whole register. When they were on their way out the store, some guy tried to knock the register out of Ice Pick’s hands. That was a bad idea, because Waffle already was thinking that he would shoot anyone who would get his way. Waffle shot the guy. The guy died.
The next day, the cops were investigating the crime scene. Witnesses said that it was four black males, all around the same height, and one of them walked with a limp. Waffle was in a car accident last year and never walked the same after that. The cops started to look for the perpetrators. They asked around and got enough information, that lead them to the Set. They brought all four boys in for questioning. They had each boy in different questioning rooms. They cracked down on them. The cops were threatening the boys. They told the boys that they would never see their families again, if they didn’t tell who killed the guy.
All the boys told on Waffle. Waffle said that Ice Pick did it. The boys were taken to court. All the boys gave their testimony. The witnesses did too. With the testimony of all involved, including the witnesses, Waffle was sentenced to life in prison without parole. The other boys were sentenced to prison for twenty years each for armed robbery. Ray-Ray and Screw Driver came home after doing five years, for good behavior. Ice Pick did all his time and became apart of the Scared Straight program. Waffle was murdered in a prison yard fight. He took a guy named Bubba’s commissary. Bubba stabbed Waffle with a sharpened toothbrush.
THE END
Monday, November 19, 2007
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THIS STORY WAS SO FUNNY BUT YET BELIEVABLE...BRANDON WHERE DO YOU GET THESE IDEAS FROM
Star-Aisha Boyd
EXPOSITION
1. WHEN/WHERE DOES THIS STORY TAKE PLACE? IN up town
2. WHAT HAS HAPPENED BEFORE? The boys sold drugs, stole from people ect.
CONFLICT AND CLIMAX
1. WHAT PROBLEMS DOES THE CENTRAL CHARACTER FACE? They had to rob a store.
2. WHEN DO YOU LEARN HOW THE PROBLEM IS WORKED OUT? Once the boys go to court.
DENOUEMENT
1. HOW DOES THE STORY END? It seemed as if they all learned there lesson.
2. SUGGEST AN EXTRA SCENE TO STRENGTHEN THE PLOT. Maybe he can tell more about when they were robbing the store.
CHARACTERIZATION
1. WHO ARE THE CHARACTERS INVOLVED IN THE STORY? HOW WOULD YOU DESCRIBE THEIR ROLES? There are four boys they are all friends. The leader name is Waffle he tells the rest of them what to do and when to do it.
2. DIRECT CHARACTERIZATION: WHAT DOES THE AUTHOR TELL US "DIRECTLY" ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST (MAIN CHARACTER) FROM HIS OR HER PHYSICAL APPEARANCE AND PERSONALITY? He really doesn’t say too much about him.
3. INDIRECT CHARACTERIZATION: WHAT DO WE LEARN "INDIRECTLY" ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST FROM WHAT HE OR SHE SAYS (DOES)? WHAT DO WE LEARN ABOUT THE PROTAGONIST FROM WHAT OTHERS SAY ABOUT HIM OR HER? He really doesn’t say too much about him.
4. SUGGEST AN ADDED DETAIL TO STRENGTHEN THE DESCRIPTION OF ONE MAJOR OR MINOR CHARACTER. He could tell how they look and how they respect waffle enough to make him a leader.
Jasmone` Townes
EXPOSiTiON
1. The story takes place in Uptown Philadelphia.
2. The Set was a gang that sold drugs, smoked weed, and just chilled, bored with their lives.
CONFliCT ANd CliMAX
1. The problem that the central character face is that he and his crew are bored and they want to find something interesting to do. So they rob a store and Waffle gets accused for killing a guy.
2. Really, the problem isn't worked out, it only get's worse. He gets caught for killing someone and recieves life in prison. While in prison, he is murdered from a fight.
dENOUEMENT
1. The story ends when Waffle gets stabbed with a sharpened toothbrush and dies, and his friends do their time and get out of jail.
2. An extra scene to strengthen the plot would be more in detail about what happend when the guy came in to knock the register out of ice-pick's hands.
CHARACTERiZATiON
1. The characters are, Waffle, the gang leader, Ice Pick, Ray-Ray, and Screw Driver. Waffle was the Set leader that everyone listened to. The rest wasn't described that much.
2. The main character isn’t really described in the story. They just say how he was basically a boss.
3. I learned that the protagonist was a leader to the set and that all his boys told on him when it came down to them getting accused for killing someone.
4. They should of described what kind a person Waffle was physically. They also could of described how the rest of the gang members were too.
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